Friday, December 2, 2011

Looking Back and Reflecting

Last year in HUMN 2001, I had difficulties with comprehending the material and integrating the concepts into the interdisciplinary essays. It was difficult to become accustomed to the formatting and figuring out how to write satisfactory essays. Unlike essays in AP Language, AP Literature, or expository writing classes in college, one’s knowledge of cultures and the ability to integrate concepts is necessary for these interdisciplinary essays. In HUMN 2001, I struggled but this year, I feel like I understand what the expectations are and I have had some practice from last year. I have been striving to improve my essay writing skills and to keep up with reading assignments better so that I will be prepared for the interdisciplinary essays. Instead of rushing through the essay planning process, I have started preparing for the essays sooner and putting more thought into them. Throughout the course of the semester, I feel like I am getting a better grasp of what constitutes a well-written, well-structured, and comprehensive essay. This course has deepened my appreciation and interest for cultures, and art in particular. I feel more cultured and aware of literature, art, and music references that I come across. World Humanities has expanded my knowledge and cognitive ability to make connections between cultures. Relating to Bloom’s taxonomy, I am more able to apply what I have learned by analyzing because in other courses in the past, there is an emphasis on memorization. I rarely feel like I am truly internalizing what I have learned because there is no application. I can still remember some of the concepts and horizons from HUMN 2001 because of the processes of reviewing, reflecting, analyzing, applying, making comparisons, and using a higher level of thinking to construct interdisciplinary essays.

I think that having a foundation and knowing the expectations for the essays from HUMN 2001 has helped me in this semester. It usually takes me a while to grow accustomed to new formats and teaching styles so having that consistency helped me focus on improving my skills. The style of teaching has been systematic and thorough, so I would tell students who are going to be in Dr. Armstrong’s HUMN 2002 class to be prepared to put in time and effort. It is not just being able to comprehend the material, but being able to apply it. Dr. Armstrong is very diligent and methodical, and he has taught us how to develop a higher level of thinking. Because he puts in the time and effort to make sure that his students are getting the most out of the course, he has been one of my favorite professors. His genuine concern for his students’ comprehension of the material is not something that one can come across in every course in college. As for the transition from the first portion of World Humanities to the second portion, there have been several aspects that have improved. The essay formatting and guidelines in HUMN 2001 were complicated and caused some misunderstandings but the progression that was made this year has made it much clearer. Being able to see examples of good essays and being taught how to prepare for the interdisciplinary exams has been very helpful. All in all, I have enjoyed being in HUMN 2001 and HUMN 2002, and they have been incomparable courses. The unique integration of literature, art, and music has expanded my knowledge and have made me realize how past eras and various cultures have influenced the present-day world.

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Reviewing Midterm Performance

For the final interdisciplinary essay exam, I will be focusing on developing and maintaining a clear line of thought throughout the whole essay. I often feel unorganized and overwhelmed by the amount of information that I have retained and want to write about. If I am not careful, I may include extraneous material that may cause my essay to stray away from the thesis. Also, I need to come up with a strong thesis and support it with literature, art, and music material that I feel the most comfortable with. For the midterm, I felt like I was more familiar with the material and perhaps it was because the differentiation between cultures was more prominent whereas the Nineteenth Century, Pre-WWI Modernism, Post-WWI Modernism, and Postwar Boom have some similar concepts. Also, I noticed that some of the comments on my essays are about expanding upon what I had stated and providing clarification. The paragraphs that had more detail often scored higher than the ones that lacked clarification.

For my essay about China, the main claim is that the Chinese hold traditional value in the question of how one can cultivate oneself to reach the highest potential. The natural course of life, also known as the Way, is the ultimate pursuit and with cultivated insight, one can embark towards a transformation. The two period concepts used throughout the essay for the literature, art and music are The Value of a Nature and a Way and Cultivated Insight. In Analects, the idea of cultivating insight through discipline, skill, and following the natural course is emphasized by Confucius. Fan Kuan represents nature, the Way, and cultivated insight through the composition of Travelers Among Mountains and Streams. The perspective represents the natural order of the universe and allows the viewer to internalize the beauty of nature and to gain insight. The Running Brook by Lui Tsun-Yuen portrays how nature is in constant flux with the representation of the movement of water. The varying tempos and dynamics emphasize the process of transforming oneself to build harmony. The conclusion introduces the idea that a strong intuition and sense of self will ensure that one is on the correct path towards achieving the Way.

Word Count: 367